[[[[[PLEASE]]]]Edit my work please.?

The interview took place in the Hong Kong Jockey Club located in Shan Kwong Road, Happy Valley on April 7th, 2008 and it was filmed from 11:00a.m to 11:30a.m. I interviewed the witness on the fourth floor of the clubhouse, in the Food Plaza. I chose this peaceful place for the interview because the office was occupied during the weekdays and it would be easier to concentrate. During the interview, the interviewee and I were sitting by the windows at the corner of the Food Plaza where we could overlook the indoor turquoise swimming pool. I have known the witness for 16 years. She is actually my aunt and I always called her Aunty Mak. My relationship with her is distant because we seldom communicate with each other. However, when there are special events to celebrate, we would have gatherings where we were able to sit down and chat. Before the interview, I was very anxious about this project because I have never interviewed a person before.